One of our followers brought up a good question-how should we phrase the message sent from the group of us with the final donation amount. The original idea was to make the donation "In Celebration of Joe." However, the following have also been suggested:
For Griffin & Rhys
For the McIntyre Family
For Griffin (since Joe's partnership with First Book was tied to his first son.)
Any thoughts or suggestions? Post them as comments!
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I say For The McIntyre Family...I had trouble for the word verification to come up. But once I tried to submit the comment once withoug the verification, the word came up.
My suggesting is
"In honor of our 'Brother' Joe McIntyre and his family for the belief that every child should enjoy the plesure of reading. From your 'Million Sisters'."
If we are doing this for Joe's birthday, shouldn't the comment just be about him, and maybe us? Maybe something like, "To celebrate the birthday of Joe, we, his Bravehearts, have made a donation to....". I dont really know, I just kind of feel that, if your doing something for someone's birthday, you dont address it to their whole family.
I agree with sentiment it should be dedicated to Joe for his birthday from his bravehearts. Maybe a wish for many more birthdays with us and his family.
Ive looked at other comments and mingled them into one! How about ... On behalf of our 'brother' Joe McIntyre and his family.To celebrate his birthday, we donate £... as we believe that every child should enjoy the pleasure of reading! With love from your 'Million Sisters' xoxox
I think it should be to just Joe for his brithday from his Bravehearts or from his Million Sisters.
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